Camel Eye

4 the super rich, the bullys fate, what's in store, 4 the hogs debate, very true Harry mate, but will they slip through the, camels needle eye gate, when judgement comes, true blue, when money wont suck you through, a pain in the ole prostate, get it gone the ill gotten dues, how do it go "the rich have more chance, of slipping a camel through the eye of a needle, than entering the kingdom of heaven" ? Don re: On the Soles of your Shoes Harry J Horsman

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Date: 2/13/2013 11:58:00 PM
Interesting write here old Don.." A well dun one on the query-theory..L O L as it goes the "eye of the needle is a small stone arch that a camel must go through in order to enter a town in Israel.. its impossible to do so with packs on so it must be divested of them then it can sqeeze through..! Jesus spoke of an everyday thing of those times that everyone could relate to..! in order to show the transient value of wealth/burdens/sins
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Date: 2/10/2013 5:59:00 AM
Very interesting, Don... Terry
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Date: 2/9/2013 4:23:00 PM
Love your take on Harry's poem. :) Keep up the great work Always, Laura
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Date: 2/9/2013 4:02:00 PM
This one is truly brilliant my friend! I have missed your poetry as of late Don! Your creativity is phenomenal, I missed your crafty pen! What a dynamic piece, Great Work!!
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Date: 2/9/2013 4:01:00 PM
Liked this a lot.....
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