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Came the Night

Oh my love your soul shone bright, then came the night. Entry for One Liner - Hello and Goodbye Poetry Contest Sponsored by Silent One. 21/12/18. Placed =1st.

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/24/2018 4:52:00 AM

- Congratulations, Gary :) - Merry Christmas ... enjoy :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gary Smith
Date: 12/24/2018 11:00:00 AM

Thank you Anne-Lise, merry Christmas. :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/23/2018 8:45:00 AM

a very poetic one!! Congrats on a well deserved win

Gary Smith
Date: 12/23/2018 9:59:00 AM

Thank you Andrea. :)

Heidi Sands

Date: 12/22/2018 1:22:00 PM

Congratulations for your win :)

Gary Smith
Date: 12/22/2018 2:13:00 PM

Thank you Heidi. :)

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 12/22/2018 10:23:00 AM

Just stopping back with congrats on your win in the monoku contest. Best wishes for the holidays, Carolyn

Gary Smith
Date: 12/22/2018 10:32:00 AM

Thank you Carolyn, and best wishes to you. :)

John Gondolf

Date: 12/22/2018 9:38:00 AM

Nicely penned monoku, Gary, congrats on your win. John

Gary Smith
Date: 12/22/2018 9:57:00 AM

Thank you John.

Alexis Y.

Date: 12/22/2018 9:26:00 AM

Hi Gary, Congratulations on your 1st place win:-) Alexis

Gary Smith
Date: 12/22/2018 9:32:00 AM

Thank you Alexis. :)

Silent One

Date: 12/22/2018 9:01:00 AM

Oh, how many will feel this one.. Nice one Gary.. Congratulations on your first place in the contest..

Gary Smith
Date: 12/22/2018 9:02:00 AM

Thank you Silent One. :)

M. L. Kiser

Date: 12/21/2018 2:53:00 PM

Oh my, that sums it up quickly. Well done Monoku.

Gary Smith
Date: 12/21/2018 3:04:00 PM

Thank you M.L. :)

Susan Ashley

Date: 12/21/2018 10:44:00 AM

Your tender monoku evokes such poignant beauty, Gary. Pure poetry! Best wishes for a win and warmest holiday wishes for you.. ~Susan

Gary Smith
Date: 12/21/2018 10:49:00 AM

Thank you Susan. :)

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 12/21/2018 8:36:00 AM

It would be nice to think the brightly shining soul could survive through the darkness. A thought-provoking one liner with an aptly place photo of a wilting rose. Best wishes in the contest, Gary.

Gary Smith
Date: 12/21/2018 10:08:00 AM

Thank you Carolyn. :)