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Came the Night

Oh my love your soul shone bright, then came the night.







Entry for
One Liner - Hello and Goodbye Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Silent One.
21/12/18. Placed =1st.

deathlosslovemonoku

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Anne-Lise Andresen

December 24, 2018 at 4:52 AM

- Congratulations, Gary :) - Merry Christmas ... enjoy :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gary Smith

December 24, 2018 at 11:00 AM

Thank you Anne-Lise, merry Christmas. :)

Andrea Dietrich

December 23, 2018 at 8:45 AM

a very poetic one!! Congrats on a well deserved win

Gary Smith

December 23, 2018 at 9:59 AM

Thank you Andrea. :)

Heidi Sands

December 22, 2018 at 1:22 PM

Congratulations for your win :)

Gary Smith

December 22, 2018 at 2:13 PM

Thank you Heidi. :)

Carolyn Devonshire

December 22, 2018 at 10:23 AM

Just stopping back with congrats on your win in the monoku contest. Best wishes for the holidays, Carolyn

Gary Smith

December 22, 2018 at 10:32 AM

Thank you Carolyn, and best wishes to you. :)

John Gondolf

December 22, 2018 at 9:38 AM

Nicely penned monoku, Gary, congrats on your win. John

Gary Smith

December 22, 2018 at 9:57 AM

Thank you John.

Alexis Y.

December 22, 2018 at 9:26 AM

Hi Gary, Congratulations on your 1st place win:-) Alexis

Gary Smith

December 22, 2018 at 9:32 AM

Thank you Alexis. :)

Silent One

December 22, 2018 at 9:01 AM

Oh, how many will feel this one.. Nice one Gary.. Congratulations on your first place in the contest..

Gary Smith

December 22, 2018 at 9:02 AM

Thank you Silent One. :)

M. L. Kiser

December 21, 2018 at 2:53 PM

Oh my, that sums it up quickly. Well done Monoku.

Gary Smith

December 21, 2018 at 3:04 PM

Thank you M.L. :)

Susan Ashley

December 21, 2018 at 10:44 AM

Your tender monoku evokes such poignant beauty, Gary. Pure poetry! Best wishes for a win and warmest holiday wishes for you.. ~Susan

Gary Smith

December 21, 2018 at 10:49 AM

Thank you Susan. :)

Carolyn Devonshire

December 21, 2018 at 8:36 AM

It would be nice to think the brightly shining soul could survive through the darkness. A thought-provoking one liner with an aptly place photo of a wilting rose. Best wishes in the contest, Gary.

Gary Smith

December 21, 2018 at 10:08 AM

Thank you Carolyn. :)

Came the Night

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