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Came Her By That Tree

Came Her By That Tree

I began the scene
as an in-between,
my ally bore mien,
the end is foreseen,
red delicious sheen
with one bite ousts queen.

2021 March 26
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Hankins Avatar
March 26, 2021 at 2:02 PM
Wow. You picked the most difficult photo, in my humble opinion, and knocked it out of the park. Very interesting write. Best of luck in the contest.
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
March 26, 2021 at 3:07 PM
I am grateful for your detailed words of care, Milton, and again, thanks for heightening my hopes my friend, Aloha!
Devonshire Avatar
March 26, 2021 at 12:40 PM
A very creative interpretation of the photo, William! You should do well in the contest with this amazing entry. Hugs, Carolyn
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
March 26, 2021 at 1:03 PM
Highly prized words you have extended, Carolyn, I'm also grateful for your encouragement, my friend, Aloha!
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