Came Her By That Tree

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Came Her By That Tree I began the scene as an in-between, my ally bore mien, the end is foreseen, red delicious sheen with one bite ousts queen. 2021 March 26

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L Milton Hankins

Date: 3/26/2021 2:02:00 PM

Wow. You picked the most difficult photo, in my humble opinion, and knocked it out of the park. Very interesting write. Best of luck in the contest.

Hilo Poet
Date: 3/26/2021 3:07:00 PM

I am grateful for your detailed words of care, Milton, and again, thanks for heightening my hopes my friend, Aloha!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/26/2021 12:40:00 PM

A very creative interpretation of the photo, William! You should do well in the contest with this amazing entry. Hugs, Carolyn

Hilo Poet
Date: 3/26/2021 1:03:00 PM

Highly prized words you have extended, Carolyn, I'm also grateful for your encouragement, my friend, Aloha!