Calm Reflection

Water in a bowl
Calm reflection of a sky
Twix leaves and branches
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Bangalee Avatar
November 26, 2022 at 9:11 PM
in the bowl water mirror the entire sky is reflecting as like flying thought !
Vinson Avatar
December 1, 2016 at 7:28 PM
I don't comment on a lot of Haikus, but this one really brings the goods. I love every line, separately, and the poem as a whole. I can see that sky, framed by the bowl, and the leaves and branches as well - surely this is the magic of Haiku - that one can feel so good from three little lines.
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