Calm Down Or Create More Chaos

Why do you always scream and yell
Putting everyone through hell
That crosses your path of shame
Always taking on the blame
That you dish out when you feel
Life is getting way to real
And you can't cope with painful days
So you find extreme bad ways
To release the built up pressure
But it doesn't make it lesser
Your just causing hurt and anguish
Which won't disappear or vanquish
Until help is being sought
With these tensions being fought
That are building more and more
Take a breath, stop, and be sure
To calm down and be relaxed
Don't let feelings attack
And take over way too long
Find a peaceful inner song
That will bring you to a place
Of happiness that will grace
Your days with joy. love, and cheer
Instead of all the bad despair
That others have always seen
Now you can start fresh and clean
Showing a new side of you
That will spread a lifetime through
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Vaillancourt Avatar
January 19, 2014 at 3:56 PM
Very good, and thought-provoking.Nice flow, nice imagery..
Dietrich Avatar
January 19, 2014 at 10:42 AM
gosh, who is this person you write about, robin? Or are you writing to all those who exhibit these flaws? In any event, I hope they wake up and smell the coffee!!! the title of this one is great too!!!
Dunn Avatar
January 18, 2014 at 6:39 PM
NICE JOB ENJOYED IT ALSO MY FRIEND. CHERI
Kendrick Avatar
January 18, 2014 at 5:34 PM
Wonderful advice to help those who are hurting one way or another..Enjoyed reading this eve..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
Carroll Avatar
January 18, 2014 at 5:25 PM
Hi Robin, Aren't boisterous people annoying? Nice write.
That Archaic Poet Avatar
January 18, 2014 at 2:45 PM
Wow. Really felt the raw emotion of this piece, Sweet Pea. I, like the others, have also known people like this. Great job conveying these unfortunate character faults and defects <3 ~Chan
Munoz Avatar
January 18, 2014 at 3:23 AM
I too know many people like this, Awesome write.
Phetmoore Avatar
January 17, 2014 at 9:08 PM
I know so many people like this. Your words nailed it. Awesome.
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