Calm Before the Storm

lakes become quiet
when a breeze suddenly stops —
nature holds its breath
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Shaw Avatar
March 14, 2020 at 4:18 AM
A brilliant depiction of the calm before the storm . . . : )
Pandit Avatar
March 9, 2020 at 7:22 AM
So well done--great ending line.
Sands Avatar
March 8, 2020 at 1:09 PM
Oh, I love this. Very nice :)
Michael Avatar
March 7, 2020 at 1:22 PM
Nice...I like it
Ashley Avatar
March 7, 2020 at 11:03 AM
Your imagery is beautifully effective, P.M. Such a great last line and a stunning haiku! Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
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