Calling Moon

Side by side we shall swim our sea of dreams,
float the waves and their caressing kisses.
Walk the stars holding hands, tip toe stardust
as it falls, answer the echo of beating hearts.
And in the land where rainbows span, the 
souls wish shall be sated by that gift of
eternity. The foreverness of you is my life's
desire, as your fragrance fills the boundaries
of my senses. For I was smitten by that first
touch, when eyes said and meant so much,
when this heart fell to its knees and I found
loves finest hour. When paradise could not
comprehend nor heaven compare to that
pleasure that filled this heart. Forever let
these lips taste of you, forever be the
morning view and sunsets fall, my warming
sun and calling moon.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010


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Date: 4/2/2010 4:38:00 PM
Sounds like love to me. Nice use of imagery to share your thoughts. Thank you for sharing your poem with us and for your kind comment. Karen
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Date: 3/25/2010 3:55:00 AM
Great romantic write...I especially like the third and fourth lines...Keep the creative pen flowing...Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara
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Date: 3/24/2010 6:31:00 AM
enjoyed
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Date: 3/23/2010 7:23:00 PM
The foreverness of u ... what an intriguing line to infiltrate the poem.. such beauty in all your writings.. these lips taste u.. another beauty... Daniel its a pleasure to read your lovely poetry... I just posted a new blog tonight and hope u will comment on it... luv and thankxxx.. "Sweetheart" SOUP MAIL shortly...luv..
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Date: 3/23/2010 4:30:00 PM
Going to my favs... this has brought a tear to my eye Daniel.... words are not enough...Always Allie
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