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Called Home

The freshness of dawn
Treachery brought along. 
When her life saw death.

© Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
February 14, 2010

Poetic form:  Haiku
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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February 16, 2010 at 7:35 PM
A great crossover poem to ease the fear of death.. luv this one .. thankxxx for sharing your precious words and thoughts.. luv.. Linda-Marie..
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February 16, 2010 at 8:00 AM
GOD WAY OF SAYING , SHE STILL UNDECIDE. OF THE IMAGE OF DEATH BEFORE HER VERY EYES....GREAT HAIKU...IRMA
Pickett Avatar
February 16, 2010 at 6:56 AM
I wouldn't want to cheat death... I want to die so I can come back reincarnated as a vampire bat....HeHe....:JP]
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February 16, 2010 at 3:49 AM
It's amazing how death cheats in so many ways, nice write Daniel
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