Called Home

Called Home The freshness of dawn Treachery brought along. When her life saw death. © Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen February 14, 2010 Poetic form: Haiku

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/16/2010 7:35:00 PM

A great crossover poem to ease the fear of death.. luv this one .. thankxxx for sharing your precious words and thoughts.. luv.. Linda-Marie..

Skat A

Date: 2/16/2010 8:00:00 AM

GOD WAY OF SAYING , SHE STILL UNDECIDE. OF THE IMAGE OF DEATH BEFORE HER VERY EYES....GREAT HAIKU...IRMA

Jared Pickett

Date: 2/16/2010 6:56:00 AM

I wouldn't want to cheat death... I want to die so I can come back reincarnated as a vampire bat....HeHe....:JP]

Daniel Cheeseman

Date: 2/16/2010 3:49:00 AM

It's amazing how death cheats in so many ways, nice write Daniel