Call of Distance

Call of Distance

                Distance mesmerizes
                Look close: Get surprises.

               Objects close or near-by
               mostly fail to catch eye.

               Things away always seem
               emitting shiny beam.

               Distant space attracts more.
               Astronauts to explore.

               Neighbor ocean ignored
              Aquanauts not adored.

              One-side  river-bank sighs
              'On other side joy lies.’

             Friend beside, right, precise 
             Yet not to realize.

             I traveled lot to see
             mountains, fountains and sea.

              Failed to appreciate
              beauty of dew droplet.

             Glistened on rose petal,
              glanced just accidental.

               
07/26/16

Re-edited  on   07/26 / 21
                           
                                          First Place
  'A Brian Strand July 24'

Contest by Brian Strand
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Merryman Avatar
July 29, 2021 at 8:21 PM
Anisha, it does seem like it's harder to see things that are right in front of you. Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M
Kauffman Avatar
July 29, 2021 at 10:02 AM
A writing coach once said to me that inspiration is always within our perspective IF we would become aware and mindful of it. You have stated this so beautifully in your poem. Congratulations on your win!
Alex Avatar
July 29, 2021 at 3:54 AM
A Beautifully created Couplet. Congratulations on your win!
Seeker Avatar
July 28, 2021 at 7:24 PM
Congrats on your win with this beautiful write, Anisha! Myriad objects … then there is enigmatic space holding everything within its invisible omnipresence
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