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Call of Distance

Call of Distance Distance mesmerizes Look close: Get surprises. Objects close or near-by mostly fail to catch eye. Things away always seem emitting shiny beam. Distant space attracts more. Astronauts to explore. Neighbor ocean ignored Aquanauts not adored. One-side river-bank sighs 'On other side joy lies.’ Friend beside, right, precise Yet not to realize. I traveled lot to see mountains, fountains and sea. Failed to appreciate beauty of dew droplet. Glistened on rose petal, glanced just accidental. 07/26/16 Re-edited on 07/26 / 21 First Place 'A Brian Strand July 24' Contest by Brian Strand

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Date: 7/29/2021 8:21:00 PM
Anisha, it does seem like it's harder to see things that are right in front of you. Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 7/29/2021 10:02:00 AM
A writing coach once said to me that inspiration is always within our perspective IF we would become aware and mindful of it. You have stated this so beautifully in your poem. Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 7/29/2021 3:54:00 AM
A Beautifully created Couplet. Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 7/28/2021 7:24:00 PM
Congrats on your win with this beautiful write, Anisha! Myriad objects … then there is enigmatic space holding everything within its invisible omnipresence
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