Pandita Sietesantos Poet Rhyme

Call Me Baby

Call Me Baby

I must confess...
I’ve caused a lot of mess,
blatantly calling you nasty names,
playing all kinds of childish games.
I used to think you couldn’t get enough
of me because I was hot stuff.
Never thought you would ever leave,
that you would always stay, I still believe.
You no longer call me on the phone…
like the proverbial cheese, I sleep alone.

Without you, Baby, I’m feeling so crazy,
really scatter-brained and hazy.
I feel like such a big fool
losing you and losing my cool.
Tell me this is not how our story ends;
please give me a second chance to make amends.
I’m sorry I did you wrong;
so sorry for stringing you along.
Please let me make it up to you;
I’ll do whatever it takes to start anew.

We were so wonderful together;
I promise this time it’ll be even better.
I miss being your leading lady…
please, please call me, Baby.


10/13/2015

Contest:      Trashed #3
Sponsor:      Broken Wings
Placement:   4th

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Funom Makama January 28, 2016 at 11:05 AM The bliss from this page cannot be exhausted. This is incredible and wonderful. Great lines and an awesome 7 Pandita Sietesantos January 29, 2016 at 2:39 PM Funom, many thanks for your superlative compliments and high score which I always appreciate! Warmest regards. Pandita

Moom Rahaman December 1, 2015 at 3:46 AM tears come from my heart Such a nice poem dear. Pandita Sietesantos December 1, 2015 at 11:53 AM Ahhhh! What a very nice compliment, Moom! Thank you anad have a wonderful day! Pandita

Jordan Cote November 27, 2015 at 10:46 AM You wrote this, but it feels like it came from my heart. Beautiful wording and so personal. amazing! Pandita Sietesantos November 27, 2015 at 4:34 PM Hi Jordan, I am really happy that you chose to read this one! Many thanks for your great compliments! Warmest regards. Pandita

David Aaron November 21, 2015 at 9:19 AM You capture regret-- perfectly. Pandita Sietesantos November 21, 2015 at 10:01 AM Hi David, I truly appreciate your wonderful compliments! Thank you so very much, my friend! Have a beautiful day! Pandita

Feli Elizab November 17, 2015 at 8:53 AM This is a raw one, and one that I can also relate to. It's hard to get that magic back once again. Pandita Sietesantos November 18, 2015 at 1:37 AM Hi Felicia, it's often too late to say "I'm sorry" and think the "one that got away" will return with open arms:-)! Thank you so much for visiting and leaving your welcomed comments! Warmest regards. Pandita

Kika Ayala November 14, 2015 at 5:51 PM Congratulations and a 7, dear Pandita, on your wonderful win! I enjoyed this piece and I am happy it placed in this contest! Kika Pandita Sietesantos November 14, 2015 at 6:01 PM Thank you so very much, Kika, for your wonderful comments and high compliments which I deeply appreciate! Have a nice weekend! Pandita

Jan Allison November 9, 2015 at 1:48 PM beautifully penned Pandita congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx Pandita Sietesantos November 9, 2015 at 3:11 PM Hi Jan, I always appreciate your kind compliments! Thank you, my friend! Pandita

Skat A November 9, 2015 at 11:12 AM Pandita, Congratulations on your Trashed #3 win. SKAT Pandita Sietesantos November 9, 2015 at 3:10 PM Skat, thank you so much for your kind congratulations! Warmest regards. Pandita

Ravi Sathasivam October 21, 2015 at 2:42 AM Excellent. Very emotional and heartfelt write. Thanks for sharing it. Pandita Sietesantos October 22, 2015 at 12:21 AM Many thanks, my friend, Ravi for your lovely comments and compliments! All the best to you. Pandita

Connie Marcum Wong October 19, 2015 at 11:29 AM Soup mail Pandita Sietesantos October 19, 2015 at 6:34 PM I'll check.

Afolabi Muideen October 18, 2015 at 4:15 PM A great deal of work you done here friend, a wonderful lyric painted with power of emotion. It is beautifully and excellently penned. I hope this will be a lesson for those who have opportunity, but misusing it: It comes only once, they should grab it with both hands. Brilliant piece...........A.M.

Paul Callus October 18, 2015 at 1:17 PM After reading a heartfelt, convincing plea like this one, how could he not give you another chance, Pandita! Unfortunately, life is not a fairy tale , and sometimes it is too late to bring love back. ~ Wishing you all the best:) ~ paul Pandita Sietesantos October 18, 2015 at 2:00 PM Thank you so very much, dear Paul, for your great comments and compliments. You are so right, we don't always get second chances regardless of how repentant we may be or how deserving we may think wer are...! Hope you are enjoying your weekend, my friend! Pandita

Sara Kendrick October 16, 2015 at 12:14 PM Sad to be in love but not loved in return..The emotion pours through the words..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara Pandita Sietesantos October 16, 2015 at 2:21 PM Many thanks, my friend for your lovely comments and compliments! All the best to you. Pandita

Connie Marcum Wong October 16, 2015 at 11:54 AM Your poem relates how desperate one becomes when the realization of loss sets in. You did a fine job on your entry Pandita! It is sure to be on the winner's list! Pandita Sietesantos October 16, 2015 at 2:25 PM So true, we shouldn't take loved ones for granted because we will certainly miss the water when the well runs dry! Thank you dear Connie for all your kind compliments and support! Pandita

Andrea Dietrich October 15, 2015 at 6:21 PM You did GREAT with this theme. So far the only one I saw in this category. It's the one I was thinking to try myself. very emotive! good luck in the contest. Pandita Sietesantos October 16, 2015 at 9:23 AM Andie, I always appreciate you thoughtful compliments and comments! Enjoy a beautiful weekend, my friend! Pandita

Robert Lindley October 13, 2015 at 11:03 PM Last time I saw pleading that epically good--I was doing it myself! lol Long, long ago in a far away galaxy . Joking aside my friend, you nailed it with that plea! A7 Pandita Sietesantos October 16, 2015 at 9:22 AM :-)! Thank you so very much, Robert, for your wonderful comments and high compliments which I deeply appreciate! Have a nice weekend! Pandita