Call

You call me
hear
here
I answer

~Haiku.ish?

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Sajdah Al-Riyami

May 19, 2009 at 7:28 AM

I love your sense of structure.Keep your work up like this:Unique and eye-drawing.Not to mention words in such simplicity create such pretty towards the poem:)

Christopher Higgins

May 17, 2009 at 4:06 PM

I love haikuish..LOL..i think it works well and it reminds me of Solomon in the bible when he was called over and aver again..yep, my mind is weird..LOL...good write.