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California Dreaming Premiere Contest Winner

the hours before dawn the trail of the bleeding moon parts the Pacific. 5/30/17

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Date: 6/9/2017 9:11:00 AM
wow, this is such a eprfect haiku, I am awed.
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Date: 6/5/2017 6:25:00 PM
dropping back with my congrats Dale I knew this was a winner the moment I read it:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 6/2/2017 8:43:00 AM
The imagery used is very rich and colorful!!! Congrats Dale, for your well, deserved first placement in the contest!! ;-)
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 6/2/2017 9:26:00 AM
Thank you, Teddy.
Date: 5/31/2017 8:49:00 PM
Wow, congrats my friend. A perfect choice for first place. Nicely done Dale.
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 6/1/2017 9:46:00 AM
thanks very much, chris.
Date: 5/31/2017 7:41:00 PM
A beautiful image!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/31/2017 7:44:00 PM
Congrats!
Date: 5/31/2017 7:25:00 PM
dropping back with my congrats Dale:-) hugs Jan xx
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 5/31/2017 7:29:00 PM
Thanks, Jan. i'm as surprised as anyone.
Date: 5/24/2017 4:25:00 PM
absolutely stunning Dale:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 5/24/2017 2:58:00 PM
A stunning visual Dale
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 5/24/2017 3:57:00 PM
Thanks, Tim!

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