Premiere Contest WinnerCalifornia Dreaming

the hours before dawn
the trail of the bleeding moon
parts the Pacific.


 5/30/17
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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June 9, 2017 at 9:11 AM
wow, this is such a eprfect haiku, I am awed.
Allison Avatar
June 5, 2017 at 6:25 PM
dropping back with my congrats Dale I knew this was a winner the moment I read it:-) hugs Jan xx
Kimathi Avatar
June 2, 2017 at 8:43 AM
The imagery used is very rich and colorful!!! Congrats Dale, for your well, deserved first placement in the contest!! ;-)
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June 2, 2017 at 9:26 AM
Thank you, Teddy.
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May 31, 2017 at 8:49 PM
Wow, congrats my friend. A perfect choice for first place. Nicely done Dale.
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June 1, 2017 at 9:46 AM
thanks very much, chris.
Rodrigues Avatar
May 31, 2017 at 7:41 PM
A beautiful image!
Rodrigues Avatar
May 31, 2017 at 7:44 PM
Congrats!
Allison Avatar
May 31, 2017 at 7:25 PM
dropping back with my congrats Dale:-) hugs Jan xx
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May 31, 2017 at 7:29 PM
Thanks, Jan. i'm as surprised as anyone.
Allison Avatar
May 24, 2017 at 4:25 PM
absolutely stunning Dale:-) hugs Jan xx
Smith Avatar
May 24, 2017 at 2:58 PM
A stunning visual Dale
Cozart Avatar
May 24, 2017 at 3:57 PM
Thanks, Tim!
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