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take a frosted walk clad tip to heel in baked pumps cupcakes for your feet

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 7/12/2020 1:44:00 AM
I came back to reread this one and take another peek at this glorious cake high heel, and I am shocked to discover the last time I read this was Friday March 13th- the first day of our school's spring break. A day we got off without knowing why were getting an extra day, not realizing we were not physically going back this year at all. I love this poem more now because of what we have gone through.
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Date: 4/18/2020 12:49:00 PM
This is so cute, Richard:) Now I'm wondering what came first...the picture or the poem?! Have a nice weekend. // paul
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Date: 3/13/2020 10:09:00 AM
This is DARLING! Love it and the photo.
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Date: 3/10/2020 7:00:00 PM
Sweet feet and a poem to match... Nice work Richard! ... I just had a birthday last week, so I could not resist choosing this one to read :)
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Date: 2/7/2020 7:26:00 AM
Oh, YES! ;D,
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Date: 2/4/2020 4:28:00 PM
So cute! Love that last line, Richard! Cheers, Gershon
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Date: 2/4/2020 6:00:00 AM
This poem is the icing on the cake richard! I wrote a poem years ago on chocolate shoes i was given lol :-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/3/2020 10:42:00 PM
This one takes the cake, Richard! :=)
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Date: 1/31/2020 12:01:00 AM
Lol. Definitely NOT a cake walk ~ More like a cake sock ;) Loved this tasty treat for the feet!
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Date: 1/27/2020 12:58:00 PM
what's that stuff upon your nose... and is that frosting on your toes... bwahahaha.. sorry couldn't help it... nice, one cute
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Date: 1/26/2020 9:40:00 AM
Ha ha, and cool photo.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/26/2020 9:40:00 AM
Thanks for your visit. ;0)
Date: 1/24/2020 5:30:00 PM
Ah, I'd be afraid to walk in that, I'd eat my feet and shoes, lol, nice one,
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Date: 1/22/2020 10:04:00 PM
Very tasty write, Richard. But I prefer sandals (lol)
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Date: 1/22/2020 5:08:00 PM
Happy feet! Enjoyed
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Date: 1/22/2020 2:30:00 PM
LOL, love this unique write
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Date: 1/20/2020 1:05:00 PM
- Stylish and tasteful :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/19/2020 8:24:00 PM
lol this was just flat out fun... ty... I needed that bad... Great stuff... Write on and on and on... I am ready to read!!! Ann
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Date: 1/19/2020 2:20:00 PM
adorable one!
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Date: 1/19/2020 2:20:00 PM
Tasty too for those with shoe fetishes!
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Date: 1/19/2020 12:19:00 PM
Great one! Sweet :)
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Date: 1/19/2020 6:12:00 AM
hahaha/// good one... glad i am a man to be honest... lol
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Date: 1/19/2020 12:31:00 AM
This is sweet! Love it! xxoo
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Date: 1/17/2020 12:23:00 PM
Cute...cuter...cutest! Nice concept and nice write, Richard! :) gw
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Date: 1/16/2020 4:33:00 PM
How sweet is this poem, Richard!
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Date: 1/16/2020 12:26:00 PM
Hello Quoth TheRaven, I like the shape of the cake. Also a poem that is different. i enjoyed this poem. Have a nice day my friend.
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