Cailyn

we have been friends for years.
You always want to bring me tears.
I donk know how you feel.
I just know i want to steal, your heart.
I promise i wont tear apart, your soul.
Your love just makes me lose control.
You cry on my shoulder at night.
Why dont you leave him yall always fight.
I cannot win your love this time.
So i went and made you this ryhme.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Gaston Avatar
April 5, 2011 at 8:57 AM
i feel like i can relate to you what you are feeling right know and at this very moment
Gaston Avatar
April 4, 2011 at 8:40 PM
yes this is a very nice peice my friend i can feel the love an emotion you but into this poem
Mehta Avatar
April 4, 2011 at 1:54 PM
beautiful expressions of feelings of love for someone making rhyme as an alternative, Dylan
Ince Avatar
April 4, 2011 at 1:49 PM
I liked this. I have the same situation! (: good luck.
Brown Avatar
April 4, 2011 at 12:48 PM
I enjoyed reading your poetry today and will be back again soon to read more Dylan. May you have a week of good health, joy and sunshine to light up your life. Love, Carol
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