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Cailyn

we have been friends for years. You always want to bring me tears. I donk know how you feel. I just know i want to steal, your heart. I promise i wont tear apart, your soul. Your love just makes me lose control. You cry on my shoulder at night. Why dont you leave him yall always fight. I cannot win your love this time. So i went and made you this ryhme.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 4/5/2011 8:57:00 AM
i feel like i can relate to you what you are feeling right know and at this very moment
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Date: 4/4/2011 8:40:00 PM
yes this is a very nice peice my friend i can feel the love an emotion you but into this poem
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Date: 4/4/2011 1:54:00 PM
beautiful expressions of feelings of love for someone making rhyme as an alternative, Dylan
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Date: 4/4/2011 1:49:00 PM
I liked this. I have the same situation! (: good luck.
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Date: 4/4/2011 12:48:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your poetry today and will be back again soon to read more Dylan. May you have a week of good health, joy and sunshine to light up your life. Love, Carol
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