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Cactus Sunset

Suddenly, a cactus smacked us, since I led, I also bled, from my head as my follower fled, into the wilderness of his youth, screaming, beaming, teeming up with, gleaming glorious blooms of June, dancing, prancing with his feet, til he became one with the sun disappearing from my sight, as light gave in to night.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2006




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Date: 4/8/2016 1:53:00 AM
Scott Brendle, awesome poem. linda
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Date: 8/23/2015 11:19:00 PM
Scott, I enjoyed reading your poem. Luv ~SKAT~
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Date: 1/11/2012 6:55:00 AM
I have enjoyed reading your poetry today Scott. I wish you the best in the New Year in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Love, Carol
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