Cactus Moon

The waning hours

Asleep in time

A dream in rhyme

Desert sublime

So says the moon

So setting soon

Upon the dunes

Cactus flowers


19Mar14
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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March 19, 2014 at 1:09 PM
Love love love it, Rick. Reminds me of the poem I posted yesterday, "Do Not Read and Operate Heavy Machinery" lol. Very tranquil and serene. Superlative images and feelings in this piece. I love your rhyme poems; hope you post many more :)
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