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Cactus Heart

You would assume I am thirsty in this dire heat, Or that my needles would cause others to quickly retreat, You would conclude that my flowers were only for show Or that if someone didn’t water me I would never grow, But what you don’t see in plain eye sight Is that I am flourishing with waters of integrity and might, Under these thorns you call choked up defenses Breeds the strength to survive all forms and pretenses, To you I require little maintenance… but I know better, I know how to absorb all I need in good and bad weather, For I was strategically placed in this atmosphere, All I need dwells in my structure enabling me to stay clear Of beasts that lurk when sandstorms arise, When mirages start to mesmerize, When signs and wonders appear in fallen skies, And soldiers forget to break ancient soul ties, I stand my post and flaunt my spikes, A cactus heart survives all flights. By: Sabina Nicole Written: In a Very dry Place Contest: Forgot

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 7/26/2012 9:47:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Yasmin's "The Unread Poems"contest Sabina. Love, Carol
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Sabina Nicole
Date: 7/26/2012 1:31:00 PM
thank you
Date: 7/25/2012 3:19:00 AM
Sabina super congrats on your win, excellent write...David
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Sabina Nicole
Date: 7/26/2012 1:34:00 PM
thank you david!
Date: 7/23/2012 7:05:00 PM
A diffinit 7 and I bet you could easily tweak this to free verse [drop the end rhyme ;0] and have a good contest entry for me on HEAT [But of course keep both versions!] Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Sabina Nicole
Date: 7/23/2012 8:36:00 PM
aww you awsome! and I will write you a fresh one!
Date: 7/23/2012 5:20:00 PM
Great poem! Wow.... Jane XoXo
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Sabina Nicole
Date: 7/23/2012 6:07:00 PM
wow thank you so much Jane!
Date: 7/23/2012 6:34:00 AM
congrats Sabina on a fabulous write and win for this contest luv.. another brilliant one ..
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Sabina Nicole
Date: 7/23/2012 3:39:00 PM
thank you so much

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