Cactus Heart

You would assume I am thirsty in this dire heat,
Or that my needles would cause others to quickly retreat,
You would conclude that my flowers were only for show
Or that if someone didn’t water me I would never grow,
But what you don’t see in plain eye sight
Is that I am flourishing with waters of integrity and might,
Under these thorns you call choked up defenses
Breeds the strength to survive all forms and pretenses,
To you I require little maintenance… but I know better,
I know how to absorb all I need in good and bad weather,
For I was strategically placed in this atmosphere,
All I need dwells in my structure enabling me to stay clear
Of beasts that lurk when sandstorms arise,
When mirages start to mesmerize,
When signs and wonders appear in fallen skies,
And soldiers forget to break ancient soul ties,
I stand my post and flaunt my spikes,
A cactus heart survives all flights.

By: Sabina Nicole
Written: In a Very dry Place
Contest: Forgot
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Brown Avatar
July 26, 2012 at 9:47 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Yasmin's "The Unread Poems"contest Sabina. Love, Carol
Nicole Avatar
July 26, 2012 at 1:31 PM
thank you
Williams Avatar
July 25, 2012 at 3:19 AM
Sabina super congrats on your win, excellent write...David
Nicole Avatar
July 26, 2012 at 1:34 PM
thank you david!
Guzzi Avatar
July 23, 2012 at 7:05 PM
A diffinit 7 and I bet you could easily tweak this to free verse [drop the end rhyme ;0] and have a good contest entry for me on HEAT [But of course keep both versions!] Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Nicole Avatar
July 23, 2012 at 8:36 PM
aww you awsome! and I will write you a fresh one!
Kostman Avatar
July 23, 2012 at 5:20 PM
Great poem! Wow.... Jane XoXo
Nicole Avatar
July 23, 2012 at 6:07 PM
wow thank you so much Jane!
Sweetheart Avatar
July 23, 2012 at 6:34 AM
congrats Sabina on a fabulous write and win for this contest luv.. another brilliant one ..
Nicole Avatar
July 23, 2012 at 3:39 PM
thank you so much
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