Placed Third in : 1602 Poetry Contest Sponsored by Brian Strand
Cacti Hiku 47 Amidst torrid sun Cacti sprout on rocky ground~ Nature`s sturdy strength. . ~~. .~~. -I t I- -I i I- -I u I- -I t I- -I o I- -I c I- -I r I- a-m-id-s-t t-o-r-r-i-d s-u-n -I a I- -I p I- -I c I- -I s I- * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * o-n r-o-c-k-y g-r-o-u-n-d-s~ * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * n ~a ~t~ u ~r ~e`s s ~t ~u ~r ~d ~y s ~t ~r ~e ~n ~g ~t ~h.
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