David William Breidenthal Poet Acrostic

C H a N G E

Cost? Um...the cost? A million times a million X.X

Hope of rope - it hits home...it hangs in there...

Angry and estranged...confused and amused...

Nothing costs a lot...time spent with you is like change...

Great! I have plenty in my pocket...

Empty-handed now...so? Buy a time machine and change, duh!

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Michael Whatley May 9, 2016 at 8:46 AM Aha, I love the loop back around to the start. Lovely little piece, imbued with personality, J.W. David William Breidenthal May 10, 2016 at 6:40 AM :) Thank you, Michael Whatley! You're awesome for reading my shtuff! XD Yeah, I have the attitude of gratitude most days - then, the opposite, which is horrid all and all. Have yourself a grand day!