Bye-bye Mr Winter

So long, Mr. Winter 
We welcome, Miss Spring 
When all snow melts 
And birds all sing 

When buds become flowers 
And trees grow green 
When bees make honey 
And help the queen 

When the waters warm 
And so, the breeze 
The boats will sail 
All across the seas 

From over the seas 
The monarchs will fly 
And soon we'll say 
Mr. Winter- "Bye-bye"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Fisher Avatar
February 2, 2025 at 3:44 PM
Nicely penned poem, Charles. I wish your words will come true sooner than later. Hurry!
Kendrick Avatar
February 2, 2025 at 5:48 AM
Congratulations on your winning work. Way to go..I agree it will be nice to see spring but not the heat of summer. Sara K
Hawley Avatar
February 1, 2025 at 9:38 PM
I fully agree with your message about So long, Mr. Winter, and welcoming Miss Spring. Congratulations on your win in my contest.
Andresen Avatar
January 31, 2025 at 3:08 AM
- I wish it was true, Charlie :) - Congratulations on your win in the contest :) - hugs
Miller Avatar
January 31, 2025 at 2:06 AM
Great poem Charles you were unconstricted by the 4x4x4x4 format, congratulations
Tor Avatar
January 28, 2025 at 5:56 PM
Can't wait Charles for the coming of Spring. March is my favorite month cause I know April is after it lol. Hope you are well my friend really enjoyed the poem you wrote about when you were growing up in the 7o's. God bless you my friend...
Delaney Avatar
January 28, 2025 at 2:52 AM
Yes winter has been like an un-welcome guest this year. Miss spring knows how to behave with sweetness and light. Cheers, SuZ
Kitchin Avatar
January 27, 2025 at 3:23 AM
Charlie, a sweet Spring poem, nicely penned. I am looking forward to winter ending.
Messina Avatar
January 27, 2025 at 8:32 AM
Tania, thank you so much! Yes, it can't come soon enough for me! Nice to see you...
Daniel Avatar
January 26, 2025 at 7:30 PM
Cool poem, Charlie, love the short lines:)
Messina Avatar
January 27, 2025 at 12:54 AM
Thank you so much, Jo! It's for a contest 4-stanzas, 4-lines, 4-words :)
Goldsmith Avatar
January 26, 2025 at 8:38 AM
What a lovely Spring write you have here. Spring will be here soon. Great Ending... Have a blessed day as you write away..................
Messina Avatar
January 27, 2025 at 12:52 AM
Hi Paula, Spring couldn't come any sooner for me...brrrr. Thank you so much! Blessings my dear friend.
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