Bye Mommy

My dearest Mommy, I love you so My heart is breaking, but I have to go I fought this fight for as long as I could My life was short but it was very good A part of me with you will remain I’ll be with Jesus in his vast domain I know you’re hurting but I’ll be okay Just remember I love you each and every day I can hear grandma’s voice and grandpa’s too I think I hear a dog barking, oh my God it’s Boo Everyone here is smiling, they’re so glad I came There’s a lot of toys here in heaven and lots of really cool games Before you know it, I’ll be back in your arms I’m no longer sick and I’m free from all harm Jesus loves us all, this I know Because that bible that you read to me tells us so September 1, 2020 Song I – Cold - Quiet Now Poetry Contest Sponsor: Rob Carmack

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 9/24/2020 10:55:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. A wonderful story/write. Life can be very painful. I am the last child out of 5. (No parents left.) Nov 2019 my brother left. I know how you feel. I am so sorry. May we all meet one day in heaven. Have a blessed day with your wonderful win.............

Mark Koplin
Date: 9/24/2020 2:05:00 PM

Thank you and we will, many great parties await us!!

Rob Carmack

Date: 9/23/2020 6:12:00 PM

I almost forgot - Boo sends a thanks and several tail wags for his inclusion in your poem.

Mark Koplin
Date: 9/23/2020 6:43:00 PM

I was wondering if you got that

Rob Carmack

Date: 9/23/2020 5:54:00 PM

I remember going to a 5 year old's funeral. I will never forget it - how he looked in his coffin and how his mother's faith kept her from jumping in her own. Thanks for supporting my contest and congrats.

Mark Koplin
Date: 9/23/2020 6:42:00 PM

Thanks for the generous placement my friend! I transported my friends dead newborn 200 miles to their home town for the funeral. The casket looked like a little treasure chest

Robert Lindley

Date: 9/4/2020 11:56:00 AM

A truly inspiring but sad reflection on a deep loss. I SAW YOUR MENTION ABOUT DEATH OF YOUR BROTHER. I too have lost a young brother, he was electrocuted in 1976 , age 14, I was 22.. It was so very painful and mom hurt so badly. He was the youngest of her 13 children born. GREAT POEM, A FAV..

Mark Koplin
Date: 9/7/2020 12:36:00 AM

Thanks Robert, I’m sorry about your brother. 13 kids wow

Tom Cunningham

Date: 9/2/2020 1:16:00 AM

Losing a child must be so heartbreaking Mark, and its something you often hear about. The only consolation is that they're no longer suffering and have gone to a better place. Tom

Tom Cunningham
Date: 9/2/2020 2:13:00 PM

So sorry to hear about your brother.

Mark Koplin
Date: 9/2/2020 3:18:00 AM

I wrote this for a contest. I tried to imagine how my mother felt when my brother was killed.

Jenna Logan

Date: 9/1/2020 7:44:00 PM

Well that just leaves me near to tears, Mark. I cannot imagine losing a child. Good luck with this contest write.

Mark Koplin
Date: 9/2/2020 3:17:00 AM

I personally haven't lost a child, but my mother did before I was born. I also have friends who have. Thanks