Bye Bye

BYE     BYE



Jet plane’s swish
Zipper across the blue

How I wish
I were going with you.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Bauer Avatar
March 16, 2017 at 4:02 PM
great poem, sidney! you've said so much in just a few perfect words...
Beck Avatar
March 17, 2017 at 1:17 PM
Great to have your support Ilene......yeah this wee verse just came from nowhere as I was idly gazing into the sky and saw a con trail from some high flying plane.....looked remarkably like a zipper opening up the sky hahaha...........best wishes and thanks
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March 16, 2017 at 12:09 PM
Fabulous write! As potent as it is brief, well done! 7 :)
Beck Avatar
March 16, 2017 at 2:59 PM
thanks for liking my poem Maureen....I always appreciate someone who takes time to comment.........best wishes
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