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once upon a time a girl thought she'd found a place a place to express her deep and foolish dreams and thoughts and fantasies secret private cove and now it's been spoiled by those that must criticize must be all they know I believe that those who feel the need must have been under the constant dark heavy blanket of scrutiny and now live to show us the way well I'm outta here thanks for the positive words from those of you that understand that we only want to hear the good keep negative out

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Date: 11/8/2010 11:43:00 AM
Anything and everything was written about this weekend. I am enjoying reading all the wonderful poetry written this past weekend and this morning. Thank you for sharing your writing Kristi. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/7/2010 8:18:00 AM
Strong words and expressions ring out in this well written piece..always Michael
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