Bye

Blue eyes filled with lies,
those eyes are breaking me down,
memories that hurt

my mask is falling,
my veil is crumbling down,
my pain is exposed

my heart fails to beat
my eyes are failing to see
I am nothing more

I am dead and gone
of this wretched life im free
now this is goodbye
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Duncan Avatar
May 10, 2016 at 2:54 PM
oohhh alright thank you :) ill remember that next time. and thank you.
Duncan Avatar
May 4, 2016 at 3:29 PM
just wanted to say that this is my first time trying to work within the confines of a haiku so sorry if it completely sucks...
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