Bryn Strudwick Poet Triolet

BY THE SEA

I saw her walking by the sea,
Her long hair blowing in the breeze.
Tall and so elegant was she. 
I saw her walking by the sea;
She was oblivious of me,
Or maybe she was just a tease.
I saw her walking by the sea,
Her long hair blowing in the breeze.

I saw her walking by the sea,
Tall and so elegant was she.
She was oblivious of me,
Or maybe she was just a tease.
Her long hair blowing in the breeze,
She captivated me with ease

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Emile Pinet October 29, 2024 at 11:16 AM Congratulations, Bryn! Your poem earned a distinguished place in my contest. Very well done. You were successful against a field of talented poets, my friend Emile.

Kim Rodrigues October 5, 2024 at 7:53 PM Very nice! Capturing a moment in time!