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By the Rules

I am not quite there yet, someday I may be, A shining example, of what the world expects of me. Once in a while I am angry, sometimes I get detached, Often a little out of sync, but I feel there is a catch. Every time I try to change, to what you want me to be, The rules you play by always change, so for now I will remain me. (Stoic)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 5/23/2012 7:54:00 AM
Half this week has sped by and I have enjoyed reading many poems. Just have to love the diversity of the poets here even in the contests. I am so happy to have been able to read your poetry today Stephen. Have a wonderful day and may you find inspiration to write more along the way. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/23/2012 4:28:00 AM
He Stephen - stay true to oneself i always say. Great poem - heartfelt.
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Date: 5/23/2012 7:11:00 AM
Hi Shaz, you are right, when we hange for others we tend to lose ourselves. -Stephen
Date: 5/22/2012 11:52:00 AM
Well done, such a lovely flowing poem. Thank you for sharing it!
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Date: 5/22/2012 11:55:00 AM
Thank you very much Aimee, I am glad you liked this poem. -Stephen.

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