By the Brook

These winter mornings
Your love in a cup of tea
Warm poems in eyes

These soft golden touch
Birds are abundant in thought
For wings from your sun

Sun will soon get harsh
Come and sit with the warm tea
Let's make the lyrics

With you in the rhyme
The crimson struggle for wine
Smiles in white and blue

Till the dew glistens
Till the breeze plays in your books
Let's sit by the brook
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9/11/2016
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Kannan Avatar
November 9, 2016 at 7:51 AM
Very cute... Beautifully penned... A 7 for this lovely piece...
Gupta Avatar
November 9, 2016 at 9:34 AM
Thank you ...
Trifiatis Avatar
November 9, 2016 at 7:40 AM
Wonderful gems of Senryu! seven for each dear, Probir!
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November 9, 2016 at 9:36 AM
Thank you ...
Daniel Avatar
November 9, 2016 at 7:35 AM
Lovely write with beautiful metaphors, Probir:)
Gupta Avatar
November 9, 2016 at 9:37 AM
Thank you for the appreciation ...
Callus Avatar
November 9, 2016 at 6:35 AM
I truly enjoyed this string of senryu, Probir...very romantic, mellow poetry. Regards // paul
Gupta Avatar
November 9, 2016 at 6:51 AM
Thank you for your kind visit ... I am glad that you liked the poem ... Regards ...
Reza Avatar
November 9, 2016 at 5:54 AM
Wonderful Senryu with excellent meaning
Gupta Avatar
November 9, 2016 at 6:28 AM
Thank you ...
White Avatar
November 9, 2016 at 5:31 AM
Ohhhh, I simply LOVE this. A fave...
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November 9, 2016 at 6:29 AM
Thank you ...
Stover Avatar
November 8, 2016 at 10:57 PM
A truly enchanting poem.
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November 9, 2016 at 5:30 AM
Thank you ...
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November 9, 2016 at 5:29 AM
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