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By the Brook

These winter mornings Your love in a cup of tea Warm poems in eyes These soft golden touch Birds are abundant in thought For wings from your sun Sun will soon get harsh Come and sit with the warm tea Let's make the lyrics With you in the rhyme The crimson struggle for wine Smiles in white and blue Till the dew glistens Till the breeze plays in your books Let's sit by the brook __________________________________________________ 9/11/2016

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Date: 11/9/2016 7:51:00 AM
Very cute... Beautifully penned... A 7 for this lovely piece...
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Probir Gupta
Date: 11/9/2016 9:34:00 AM
Thank you ...
Date: 11/9/2016 7:40:00 AM
Wonderful gems of Senryu! seven for each dear, Probir!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 11/9/2016 9:36:00 AM
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Date: 11/9/2016 7:35:00 AM
Lovely write with beautiful metaphors, Probir:)
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Probir Gupta
Date: 11/9/2016 9:37:00 AM
Thank you for the appreciation ...
Date: 11/9/2016 6:35:00 AM
I truly enjoyed this string of senryu, Probir...very romantic, mellow poetry. Regards // paul
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Probir Gupta
Date: 11/9/2016 6:51:00 AM
Thank you for your kind visit ... I am glad that you liked the poem ... Regards ...
Date: 11/9/2016 5:54:00 AM
Wonderful Senryu with excellent meaning
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Probir Gupta
Date: 11/9/2016 6:28:00 AM
Thank you ...
Date: 11/9/2016 5:31:00 AM
Ohhhh, I simply LOVE this. A fave...
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Probir Gupta
Date: 11/9/2016 6:29:00 AM
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Date: 11/8/2016 10:57:00 PM
A truly enchanting poem.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 11/9/2016 5:30:00 AM
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Probir Gupta
Date: 11/9/2016 5:29:00 AM

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