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By Steam Train

The big black engine snorting, Driven by the power of steam The whistle blowing to trail Far behind it’s muted scream, Forging through the night. I’m safe and warm inside Enjoying every single second Of that comfortable ride A sense of isolation A feeling of escape As we steam on through A dark blurred landscape. In that intimate compartment Almost like being in a cocoon Half awake half dreaming until Journey’s end all too soon. Nothing quite as luxurious as A long night journey by train, Reality slowly returning to A reluctantly waking brain. Back out into a real world Of noise cold and light Waiting friends at the barrier Coming slowly into sight. The big black engine crouching At the platform’s very end. Whispering a steamy goodbye Almost like a parting from a friend.

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Date: 1/15/2023 1:33:00 PM
i've never been on a long train ride, terry, but you make it sound very appealing...
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Terry Ireland
Date: 1/15/2023 1:54:00 PM
Thanks ilene. Before the days of mobile phones and laptops a long train journey was such a delightful escape. Not so nice now but can still be a treat if you don’t have to listen to the phone calls.
Date: 1/15/2023 11:31:00 AM
Love this Terry brings many memories of A train ride I took to California. Your words brought me there again. Love this one. Thanks for the memories...
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Terry Ireland
Date: 1/15/2023 1:51:00 PM
Thanks Michael - you’ve now set me thinking about Country Music Trains, California Zephyr, City Of New Orleans, Wabash Cannon Ball. Yep, thanks again.
Date: 1/15/2023 9:22:00 AM
I used to be terrified of those loud, noisy smoky awful trains, when I was little. Finally went on one for a holiday once and they weren't so bad from the inside ! You brought back memories of over 60 years ago Terry, thank you.
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Terry Ireland
Date: 1/15/2023 1:49:00 PM
Favourite part of any leave was the night train from Kings X to Hull when they still had steam trains and the old 10 seat compartments. Warm, safe and it was 3 - 4 hour journey. Always felt proper welcime home. Thanks Wen

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