Butterfly

Noiselessly floating- on those silky windless wings in life's brief moment. (one of my first Haiku- archives 2001)

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Debbie Duncan

Date: 5/23/2017 10:58:00 PM

Love a haiku 7

Lenna Walker
Date: 5/24/2017 10:21:00 AM

Hi Debbie, Glad you like it ! Thank You :)

Anne-Marie Coreggia

Date: 5/23/2017 10:43:00 PM

Lenna, this is the most lovely haiku. Such a treat! A 7 and beyond:) Amitiés

Lenna Walker
Date: 5/24/2017 10:21:00 AM

Thank You kindly Anne Marie, for your wonderful comment :)

Joseph May

Date: 5/23/2017 10:34:00 PM

Beautiful haiku Lenna

Lenna Walker
Date: 5/24/2017 10:18:00 AM

Hi Joseph, Thank You so much :) and for visiting me !

Darren White

Date: 5/23/2017 12:09:00 PM

Owww, Lenna, simply beautiful, I see them flutter and float :)

Lenna Walker
Date: 5/23/2017 12:16:00 PM

:) :) Thank You so much Darren. Butterflies, Dragonflies and Lightening Bugs (and some moths) are the jewels of the flying insect world (in my eyes)

Chris Green

Date: 5/23/2017 11:40:00 AM

I'm with Jan below, absolutely beautiful. A fave for sure. I have a soft spot for butterflies.

Lenna Walker
Date: 5/23/2017 11:56:00 AM

Thank You my talented friend, I do also (bet you didn't know :)) Another of Nature's beauties !!

Jan Allison

Date: 5/23/2017 11:36:00 AM

absolutely beautiful Lenna:-) adding this to my faves:-) hugs Jan xx

Lenna Walker
Date: 5/23/2017 11:51:00 AM

aw, Thanks Jan, that means a lot !! Hugs my friend :)