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Butterfly

Please don't look at me for I am not what you see my wings are still wet

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 7/20/2016 4:09:00 PM
Metamorphosis. Good natural Haiku. A little of the Japanese in this one, yes? Congrats, daver
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Sandi Maddox Hoot
Date: 7/20/2016 9:01:00 PM
Thank u:) have a beautiful night
Date: 4/22/2016 8:10:00 AM
- Welcome Sandi - A great haiku .... I love haiku poems - hugs // Sun :)
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Sandi Maddox Hoot
Date: 7/20/2016 9:02:00 PM
Thank u- and I needed that hug:) been a rough day
Date: 4/18/2016 11:01:00 PM
Your words have an esoteric feel to them Sandi, I read this over and over, beautiful.
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Sandi Maddox Hoot
Date: 7/20/2016 9:02:00 PM
Thank u:)
Date: 4/18/2016 6:56:00 PM
Wow, love the haiku and sadness...Linda
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Date: 4/18/2016 2:57:00 PM
Hello, Sandi; I tried to send this message to you Mail inbox, but it wouldn't allow me to send it, so I sent here message below. Hello, Sandi; do you have Microsoft Word? If you do always write your poetry and save it, and also all material that is posted on Poetry Soup is copy written, and published. They should have their policy on their copy write, and privacy policies.
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Sandi Maddox Hoot
Date: 4/18/2016 5:20:00 PM
Thank you so much!
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Dana Redricks
Date: 4/18/2016 2:59:00 PM
I like your poem Sandi and symbolic message.
Date: 4/18/2016 2:46:00 PM
Very nice poem.
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Sandi Maddox Hoot
Date: 4/18/2016 5:20:00 PM
Thank you!