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Butterfly

Please don't look at me
for I am not what you see
my wings are still wet

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Daver Austin

July 20, 2016 at 4:09 PM

Metamorphosis. Good natural Haiku. A little of the Japanese in this one, yes? Congrats, daver

Sandi Maddox Hoot

July 20, 2016 at 9:01 PM

Thank u:) have a beautiful night

Anne-Lise Andresen

April 22, 2016 at 8:10 AM

- Welcome Sandi - A great haiku .... I love haiku poems - hugs // Sun :)

Sandi Maddox Hoot

July 20, 2016 at 9:02 PM

Thank u- and I needed that hug:) been a rough day

Lenny Gazbowski

April 18, 2016 at 11:01 PM

Your words have an esoteric feel to them Sandi, I read this over and over, beautiful.

Sandi Maddox Hoot

July 20, 2016 at 9:02 PM

Thank u:)

Poet Destroyer A

April 18, 2016 at 6:56 PM

Wow, love the haiku and sadness...Linda

Dana Redricks

April 18, 2016 at 2:57 PM

Hello, Sandi; I tried to send this message to you Mail inbox, but it wouldn't allow me to send it, so I sent here message below. Hello, Sandi; do you have Microsoft Word? If you do always write your poetry and save it, and also all material that is posted on Poetry Soup is copy written, and published. They should have their policy on their copy write, and privacy policies.

Sandi Maddox Hoot

April 18, 2016 at 5:20 PM

Thank you so much!

Dana Redricks

April 18, 2016 at 2:59 PM

I like your poem Sandi and symbolic message.