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Butterfly

Who painted  your wings
bringing colors from rainbow
please,
tell me, if you know.

When flowers are chuckling
getting heavenly touch of sun
please,
enjoy them,if you want.
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Haiku with syllable 5,7,1,5 format

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Jan Allison

Date: 5/26/2016 4:30:00 PM

such amazing imagery Manmath really enjoyed these two poems:-) hugs jan xx

Keith Bickerstaffe

Date: 5/13/2016 11:51:00 PM

Fine form and language Manmath... I love the part about chuckling flowers!! Best wishes, Keith

Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 5/13/2016 11:52:00 PM

...sorry about the dup! Keith

Keith Bickerstaffe

Date: 5/13/2016 11:48:00 PM

A 7 and a favorite! Fine form... I love the part about chuckling flowers!! Well done Manmath. Best wishes, Keith

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 5/5/2016 9:17:00 AM

This is quite lovely!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/21/2016 11:33:00 PM

Hi, Manmath, nice to see this one again. Thank you for always being true... LINDA

Charlene Plummer

Date: 4/19/2016 6:51:00 PM

Hey... this was great best of luck threw your travels with poetry and motion

Bl Devnath

Date: 4/15/2016 7:26:00 AM

Nice poem enjoyed from you my lovely friend. Loved always, bl

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/9/2016 8:15:00 PM

how sweet this is. I enjoyed it for sure.

Timothy Hicks

Date: 4/7/2016 9:50:00 PM

Unorthodox haiku, but lovely indeed. "tell me, if you know" "enjoy them, if you want" ... you used delightful language here, Manmath. Were you chuckling or was it the flowers ;) Perhaps both ...