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Butterfly

Who painted your wings bringing colors from rainbow please, tell me, if you know. When flowers are chuckling getting heavenly touch of sun please, enjoy them,if you want. ----------------------------- Haiku with syllable 5,7,1,5 format

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Date: 5/26/2016 4:30:00 PM
such amazing imagery Manmath really enjoyed these two poems:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 5/13/2016 11:51:00 PM
Fine form and language Manmath... I love the part about chuckling flowers!! Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 5/13/2016 11:52:00 PM
...sorry about the dup! Keith
Date: 5/13/2016 11:48:00 PM
A 7 and a favorite! Fine form... I love the part about chuckling flowers!! Well done Manmath. Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 5/5/2016 9:17:00 AM
This is quite lovely!
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Date: 4/21/2016 11:33:00 PM
Hi, Manmath, nice to see this one again. Thank you for always being true... LINDA
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Date: 4/19/2016 6:51:00 PM
Hey... this was great best of luck threw your travels with poetry and motion
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Date: 4/15/2016 7:26:00 AM
Nice poem enjoyed from you my lovely friend. Loved always, bl
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Date: 4/9/2016 8:15:00 PM
how sweet this is. I enjoyed it for sure.
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Date: 4/7/2016 9:50:00 PM
Unorthodox haiku, but lovely indeed. "tell me, if you know" "enjoy them, if you want" ... you used delightful language here, Manmath. Were you chuckling or was it the flowers ;) Perhaps both ...
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Date: 4/3/2016 2:08:00 PM
- This is wonderful, Manmath ! - Is this for contest (?) .... If it is ..... I wish you good luck :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Sunshine Smile
Date: 4/3/2016 2:28:00 PM
- My poem to this contest: " - A Symbol Of Love - " :)
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Sunshine Smile
Date: 4/3/2016 2:23:00 PM
Hope you will win :)
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Manmath Dalei
Date: 4/3/2016 2:21:00 PM
Yes, It's for contest. Thank u ...........hugs
Date: 4/2/2016 1:38:00 PM
Hi, Manmath...intriguing haiku.. I will enjoy them. Butterflies are one of the most beautiful creations. Don't you think? Awesome Linda
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Manmath Dalei
Date: 4/2/2016 6:36:00 PM
Thank u Linda........