Manmath Dalei Poet Haiku

Butterfly

Who painted  your wings
bringing colors from rainbow
please,
tell me, if you know.

When flowers are chuckling
getting heavenly touch of sun
please,
enjoy them,if you want.
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Haiku with syllable 5,7,1,5 format

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Jan Allison May 26, 2016 at 4:30 PM such amazing imagery Manmath really enjoyed these two poems:-) hugs jan xx

Keith Bickerstaffe May 13, 2016 at 11:51 PM Fine form and language Manmath... I love the part about chuckling flowers!! Best wishes, Keith Keith Bickerstaffe May 13, 2016 at 11:52 PM ...sorry about the dup! Keith

Keith Bickerstaffe May 13, 2016 at 11:48 PM A 7 and a favorite! Fine form... I love the part about chuckling flowers!! Well done Manmath. Best wishes, Keith

Richard Lamoureux May 5, 2016 at 9:17 AM This is quite lovely!

Poet Destroyer A April 21, 2016 at 11:33 PM Hi, Manmath, nice to see this one again. Thank you for always being true... LINDA

Charlene Plummer April 19, 2016 at 6:51 PM Hey... this was great best of luck threw your travels with poetry and motion

Bl Devnath April 15, 2016 at 7:26 AM Nice poem enjoyed from you my lovely friend. Loved always, bl

Andrea Dietrich April 9, 2016 at 8:15 PM how sweet this is. I enjoyed it for sure.

Timothy Hicks April 7, 2016 at 9:50 PM Unorthodox haiku, but lovely indeed. "tell me, if you know" "enjoy them, if you want" ... you used delightful language here, Manmath. Were you chuckling or was it the flowers ;) Perhaps both ...

Anne-Lise Andresen April 3, 2016 at 2:08 PM - This is wonderful, Manmath ! - Is this for contest (?) .... If it is ..... I wish you good luck :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Anne-Lise Andresen April 3, 2016 at 2:28 PM - My poem to this contest: " - A Symbol Of Love - " :) Anne-Lise Andresen April 3, 2016 at 2:23 PM Hope you will win :) Manmath Dalei April 3, 2016 at 2:21 PM Yes, It's for contest. Thank u ...........hugs

Poet Destroyer A April 2, 2016 at 1:38 PM Hi, Manmath...intriguing haiku.. I will enjoy them. Butterflies are one of the most beautiful creations. Don't you think? Awesome Linda Manmath Dalei April 2, 2016 at 6:36 PM Thank u Linda........