Butterfly

Fluttering wings flap
Aerial acrobatics
Dancing in the breeze
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Chircop Avatar
August 25, 2009 at 2:37 AM
butterfly-freeddom once more,as the butterfly dances in the sweet wind breeze.i can nearly feel me flying with it there ............awesome,love your style--charma
Devonshire Avatar
August 24, 2009 at 7:32 PM
Never thought of butterflies doing "aerial acrobatics" before, but it's a great description of their unpredictable flight patterns, James. Lovely haiku! Best to you, Carolyn
Kendrick Avatar
August 24, 2009 at 5:23 PM
Very descriptive Haiku. Keep writing. Sara
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