Butterfly

A new-formed butterfly so fragile it appears Emerging from its cocoon admiring eyes, overflowing tears

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Panagiota Romios

Date: 3/17/2024 6:15:00 PM

I thought you made fin of us who wrote about butterflies! Anyway…this is a wonderful one, Pangie xx

Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/17/2024 6:32:00 PM

Now I can make fun of myself! After I exhaust other topics, I'm left with butterflies, romance, sunrises and sunsets. What can I do?

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 3/17/2024 5:47:00 AM

how captivating. My dad raised Monarch butterflies (when in his 60s and 70s); he literally cried each time one emerged from its cocoon...such a soulful man he was.

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 3/16/2024 9:17:00 PM

A very descriptive poem. All we need is warmer weather.