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butterflies rise up

butterflies rise up thunderous clapping of wings the rose bushes sway
Russell Sivey

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Date: 12/7/2012 5:32:00 AM
a gorgeous sight to behold .. I so luv butterflies .. so free and graceful as your perfect lines my friend ..
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Date: 12/5/2012 4:25:00 PM
very interesting second line. Makes me think there is something else involved other than butterflies. I really like this.
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Date: 12/5/2012 2:46:00 PM
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Date: 12/5/2012 5:38:00 AM
So nicely done...
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Date: 12/5/2012 12:04:00 AM
It's an authentic haiku. Go on this way. Can I post it on my poetry blog
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Date: 12/4/2012 9:01:00 PM
becos of little things, winged monsters come in sight today :) sorry buddy ratchet jaw has been, love your poem!
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Date: 12/4/2012 8:25:00 PM
Likened to a rose garden concert!! I give this a standing ovation for its imagery! If u could only have a picture to accompany this power-packed scene! (I know I know...I am a sucker for a great butterfly photo!!!) It also has a spirit filled title!! gwendolen
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Date: 12/4/2012 2:37:00 PM
Really like this one..I am glad that I chose it to read today..I will have to wait until next spring and summer to enjoy the butterflies again..Thanks for stopping by..Your comments are always so uplifting..No I have not had any help from Deb..Sara
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