Butterflies Rise Up

butterflies rise up thunderous clapping of wings the rose bushes sway Russell Sivey

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/7/2012 5:32:00 AM

a gorgeous sight to behold .. I so luv butterflies .. so free and graceful as your perfect lines my friend ..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/5/2012 4:25:00 PM

very interesting second line. Makes me think there is something else involved other than butterflies. I really like this.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/5/2012 2:46:00 PM

:-)..pd

Carma Sanderson

Date: 12/5/2012 5:38:00 AM

So nicely done...

Vassilis Comporozos

Date: 12/5/2012 12:04:00 AM

It's an authentic haiku. Go on this way. Can I post it on my poetry blog fryktorein.blogspot.gr?

Don Johnson

Date: 12/4/2012 9:01:00 PM

becos of little things, winged monsters come in sight today :) sorry buddy ratchet jaw has been, love your poem!

Gwendolen Song

Date: 12/4/2012 8:25:00 PM

Likened to a rose garden concert!! I give this a standing ovation for its imagery! If u could only have a picture to accompany this power-packed scene! (I know I know...I am a sucker for a great butterfly photo!!!) It also has a spirit filled title!! gwendolen

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/4/2012 2:37:00 PM

Really like this one..I am glad that I chose it to read today..I will have to wait until next spring and summer to enjoy the butterflies again..Thanks for stopping by..Your comments are always so uplifting..No I have not had any help from Deb..Sara