Butterflies

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She was told, "You've changed like a butterfly."

Minerva met the Savior early one MORN MORN draped in silk of WHITE WHITE reigned supremely PURE PURE as the black of night, when she entered new haven. * Inspired by Nette Onclaud

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Diane Christian

Date: 7/6/2015 12:02:00 AM

beautiful write, so colourful thank you for your kind comments on my poetry

Iris E. S-Lewis
Date: 7/13/2015 7:27:00 PM

Has to do with going to Rehab, 14 yrs ago. No more cigarettes, no more rock white hemlock. Blessings your way.

John Fleming

Date: 6/18/2015 5:16:00 AM

A Seven from me! I too had to read it twice to truly appreciate its cleverly constructed form. Very nicely done, Iris. My very best regards!! :-) john

Iris E. S-Lewis
Date: 6/21/2015 5:51:00 PM

Thank you, John, for stopping by with your warmth. Blessings.

Courtney Courtney

Date: 6/18/2015 1:44:00 AM

nice format makes it interesting I had to read it twice to get it that makes it even better to me ^6

Iris E. S-Lewis
Date: 6/21/2015 5:54:00 PM

Courtney, I do thank you for your kind comment. Has to do with start of recovery. Blessings your way.