Notes About The Poem

She was told, "You've changed like a butterfly."

Butterflies

Minerva met the Savior early one MORN

MORN draped in silk of WHITE

WHITE reigned supremely PURE

PURE as the black of night, when she entered new haven.

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Inspired by Nette Onclaud
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Christian Avatar
July 6, 2015 at 12:02 AM
beautiful write, so colourful thank you for your kind comments on my poetry
Sankey- Lewis Avatar
July 13, 2015 at 7:27 PM
Has to do with going to Rehab, 14 yrs ago. No more cigarettes, no more rock white hemlock. Blessings your way.
Fleming Avatar
June 18, 2015 at 5:16 AM
A Seven from me! I too had to read it twice to truly appreciate its cleverly constructed form. Very nicely done, Iris. My very best regards!! :-) john
Sankey- Lewis Avatar
June 21, 2015 at 5:51 PM
Thank you, John, for stopping by with your warmth. Blessings.
Courtney Avatar
June 18, 2015 at 1:44 AM
nice format makes it interesting I had to read it twice to get it that makes it even better to me ^6
Sankey- Lewis Avatar
June 21, 2015 at 5:54 PM
Courtney, I do thank you for your kind comment. Has to do with start of recovery. Blessings your way.
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