Brandy Nicole Poet Rhyme

Buttercup

Sweetly her fragrance intoxicates
a gentle flower, in the stillness she waits
the music her breathing creates

Her secret lullaby

She can't disguise her beauty
and how magical falling can be
the touch of love is no mystery

Her breathtaking sigh

A buttercup she is . .
Capturing moments like this


Featured Poem- 3/17/2024

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Joseph May February 12, 2019 at 8:07 AM Love the 3rd line of this beautiful write Brandy.. Brandy Nicole February 12, 2019 at 6:36 PM Thank you Joseph. :) Very kind of you to say. I appreciate you taking the time, to come by and read this little scribble of mine. ~ Brandy

John Gondolf February 1, 2019 at 12:49 PM A beautiful 'Bama Buttercup she is... Brandy Nicole February 1, 2019 at 8:15 PM Such a sweet thing to say. :) Thank you John for your kind words. ~ Brandy

Mark Toney July 6, 2018 at 8:25 AM Brandy, how nicely you capture the snapshot in time of a young girl falling in love, perhaps for the first time? If not the first time, “the touch of love is no mystery” but still “magical.” Nicely done. Brandy Nicole July 6, 2018 at 9:34 AM This holds many moments and emotions. A woman is as delicate as a flower, and a flower is a delicate beauty. Yes, love is magical. Thank you Mark for your lovely comment. :) Brandy

Sylvia Coulstock June 29, 2018 at 9:28 AM You have excelled again Brandy by capturing the unassuming beauty of the humble buttercup.And you capture me every time I read your work.. Brandy Nicole June 29, 2018 at 11:57 AM Thank you SYLVIA. I am happy that you enjoyed my poem. Your kind words are appreciated. :) Brandy

Pandita Sietesantos June 21, 2018 at 4:45 PM OMG, this is such a beautiful piece - a lovely ode to a lovely buttercup! The imagery is outstanding, my friend! Love and hugs. Pandita Brandy Nicole June 21, 2018 at 7:03 PM Thank you Pandita. Your thoughts bring a smile. :) I am happy that you enjoyed this. ~ Maia

John Castellenas June 20, 2018 at 10:30 AM Wonderful use of words. Your description made the reader understand and believe your words. Brandy Nicole June 20, 2018 at 11:52 AM Thank you John. I appreciate you reading my poetic thoughts. ~ Maia

Silent One June 19, 2018 at 5:13 PM Wow.... love how your poetry just flows and creates the most wonderful imagery... Brandy Nicole June 19, 2018 at 10:16 PM Thank you Silent One. Your thoughts bring a smile. I appreciate your kind words. :) Maia