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Buttercup

Sweetly her fragrance intoxicates a gentle flower, in the stillness she waits the music her breathing creates Her secret lullaby She can't disguise her beauty and how magical falling can be the touch of love is no mystery Her breathtaking sigh A buttercup she is . . Capturing moments like this Featured Poem- 3/17/2024

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Joseph May

Date: 2/12/2019 8:07:00 AM

Love the 3rd line of this beautiful write Brandy..

Brandy Nicole
Date: 2/12/2019 6:36:00 PM

Thank you Joseph. :) Very kind of you to say. I appreciate you taking the time, to come by and read this little scribble of mine. ~ Brandy

John Gondolf

Date: 2/1/2019 12:49:00 PM

A beautiful 'Bama Buttercup she is...

Brandy Nicole
Date: 2/1/2019 8:15:00 PM

Such a sweet thing to say. :) Thank you John for your kind words. ~ Brandy

Mark Toney

Date: 7/6/2018 8:25:00 AM

Brandy, how nicely you capture the snapshot in time of a young girl falling in love, perhaps for the first time? If not the first time, “the touch of love is no mystery” but still “magical.” Nicely done.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 7/6/2018 9:34:00 AM

This holds many moments and emotions. A woman is as delicate as a flower, and a flower is a delicate beauty. Yes, love is magical. Thank you Mark for your lovely comment. :) Brandy

Sylvia Coulstock

Date: 6/29/2018 9:28:00 AM

You have excelled again Brandy by capturing the unassuming beauty of the humble buttercup.And you capture me every time I read your work..

Brandy Nicole
Date: 6/29/2018 11:57:00 AM

Thank you SYLVIA. I am happy that you enjoyed my poem. Your kind words are appreciated. :) Brandy

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 6/21/2018 4:45:00 PM

OMG, this is such a beautiful piece - a lovely ode to a lovely buttercup! The imagery is outstanding, my friend! Love and hugs. Pandita

Brandy Nicole
Date: 6/21/2018 7:03:00 PM

Thank you Pandita. Your thoughts bring a smile. :) I am happy that you enjoyed this. ~ Maia

John Castellenas

Date: 6/20/2018 10:30:00 AM

Wonderful use of words. Your description made the reader understand and believe your words.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 6/20/2018 11:52:00 AM

Thank you John. I appreciate you reading my poetic thoughts. ~ Maia

Silent One

Date: 6/19/2018 5:13:00 PM

Wow.... love how your poetry just flows and creates the most wonderful imagery...

Brandy Nicole
Date: 6/19/2018 10:16:00 PM

Thank you Silent One. Your thoughts bring a smile. I appreciate your kind words. :) Maia