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Butter Me Not

I’m not a croissant
nor am I whole wheat bread….
butter me not







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Andrea Dietrich

November 15, 2011 at 8:05 PM

coming back to this one. I read the comments you got and began wondering if i had gotten it the first time or not!!

Poet Destroyer A

October 21, 2011 at 10:04 AM

would you play dance dance revolution with me you could be my dancing monky partner

Poet Destroyer A

October 21, 2011 at 9:53 AM

,Good morning,~ Nikko ~ how are you this wonderful Friday :-) morning... As for me, I'm so glad the soup is up,,up,,,there i was missing everyone I know here on the soup PLUS more. *glad we are back up aren't you... By the way I'm also stopping by to read a couple of poems OR commenting the ones I could not all week or yesterday, after being shut out for them awful few days. i'm going comment crazy~~Take care and have yourself a wonderful Friday~ ;-) Always,..p.d.

October 10, 2011 at 7:29 PM

Interesting perspective for the reader to ponder about. Thank you for sharing your words. Karen

Black Eyed Susan

September 29, 2011 at 5:31 PM

ha! a great way to describe sucking up and brown nosers! love it :)

Gwendolen Song

September 22, 2011 at 9:05 PM

Hi Rio! I get it! I get it!! Some senryus are so witty they go poooof, right over my head!.....As someone who Overdosed on butter today, this is hilarious. Congrats on your recent poetry prosperity! Best to you! GWendolen......great title.

Connie Marcum Wong

September 22, 2011 at 7:07 AM

A poem that begs for reflection Nikko. You are a lady of mystery. I enjoyed your metaphoric message here. Mahalo, Connie Wondering about your name change too?

Andrea Dietrich

September 22, 2011 at 1:39 AM

well, nikko. Whether the experts would agree that this is a real senryu or not, I think it is really cool. What made you think to do this one? I love it! (took the pain pill and the dang thing barely worked for even an hour. I'm gonna get off here now. I should have just lain in my bed watching tv!) LUv, Andrea

Elizabeth Wesley

September 21, 2011 at 6:43 PM

Can I butter you nut? Keeps my blood flowing with your wit. I have to remember who you are - how come you chaged your name?

Poet Destroyer A

September 21, 2011 at 12:37 PM

Lol,, I feel like changing my name all of a sudden... I really want to know what is behind your new name... I like it... Is it crazy likes Chris A.... Lol.... Stooping by to say hi and butter me up please... I beg you I'm like a waffle... Hahaha... Take care luv ya... Skat

Harry Horsman

September 21, 2011 at 6:11 AM

excellent theme, and so profound in such a small form of poetry, really like this. harry

Nette Onclaud

September 20, 2011 at 5:33 PM

butter is grreat with bibingka, nikks!...your perky write upped the adrenalin, whoo!...if you go to rustan's, it's xmas-decked! okay tulog na ko, lol.. and you?.. hala, we won't make it to school, lol... gimme more of this grreat stuff! : )huggs, nette

Nette Onclaud

September 20, 2011 at 5:35 PM

i'll be clouds on a net, yayy! :)