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Butter Fly To Jan

As my butterfly emerges from it's cocoon. I whisper a secret in this hot house room. Spread your wings my little friend. I want you to help someone mend. Take a message across the Irish Sea. To the Isle of Man, if you please. Land on the shoulder of my friend Jan. Tell her it's good she is so calm. If the face of undeserved favouritism. She has risen above giving criticism. To those who desreve to be ashamed. When my friend Jan was not to blame. Thank you butterfly and thank you Jan. Remember you have the love of a decent man.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 7/6/2016 2:57:00 PM
oh, I read below here and found out it has nothing to do with the Soup. That is GOOD news but you were a wonderful friend anyway to know her personal plight and write this sweet poem for her. I hope to get into communication with her again too, now tHat I am home from my little vacay. Very nice, Jean.
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Jean Murray
Date: 7/6/2016 6:49:00 PM
Thank you Andrea. Along with Silent One, Jan welcomed me with open arms here. One does not forget these things.
Date: 7/5/2016 12:28:00 PM
- LOVELY ...... with LARGE letters, Jean !!!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/5/2016 12:50:00 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise. The butterfly idea and Jan were both in my head at the same time.
Date: 7/5/2016 11:51:00 AM
Aww Jean I have a huge lump in my throat and tears in my eye - such a lovely poem I will fave it and treasure your wonderful words - i love butterflies as much as i marvel at dragonflies:-) The final lines are perfect without my hubbies love and support my life could have been so so different we are a great team:-) hugs jan xx7
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Date: 7/5/2016 12:49:00 PM
My heart just went out to the child in you Jan.
Date: 7/5/2016 9:48:00 AM
Hi Jean, I enjoyed your piece for Jan. All I know is she is one of the good ingredients of soup. Always so kind and encouraging. And doesn't mind being a friend to new a person on the site. And she's very talented and so dang funny. So I say the critics are just starting mess-Alexis
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Date: 7/5/2016 9:51:00 AM
Sorry Alexis, my reply was meant for Victor. I agree, she is a breath of fresh air here.
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Date: 7/5/2016 9:49:00 AM
Sorry Victor, I wrote this today in response to comments she made herself regarding to her own family. Nothing at all to do with the Soup. I avoid the blogs like the plague, as I prefer to "hear no evil...see no evil." etc.

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