But With You

It's ringing in my ears
It's unfolding all my fears
It's killing all my dreams
It's as scary as it seems
It's scraping off my thoughts
Tying me tightly into knots
It's spearing me with pins
Leaving me shattered as smithereens

But with you I feel the sun
But with you the heat can't burn
But with you I feel at peace
But with you I feel the bliss

You're my shade in the stormy weather
You're my shade cause now we're together
Relieve your doubts...if,when or whether
Make your heart light as a feather...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Hodges Avatar
February 22, 2020 at 11:08 AM
I love how the rhythmI in the first stanza matches the tone of the words. Good work on this.
Mbogo Avatar
March 21, 2020 at 5:15 AM
Thank you..am just 16 by the way..still learning..but I appreciate
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