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BUT WITH YOU

It's ringing in my ears It's unfolding all my fears It's killing all my dreams It's as scary as it seems It's scraping off my thoughts Tying me tightly into knots It's spearing me with pins Leaving me shattered as smithereens But with you I feel the sun But with you the heat can't burn But with you I feel at peace But with you I feel the bliss You're my shade in the stormy weather You're my shade cause now we're together Relieve your doubts...if,when or whether Make your heart light as a feather...

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Date: 2/22/2020 11:08:00 AM
I love how the rhythmI in the first stanza matches the tone of the words. Good work on this.
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wanjiru mbogo
Date: 3/21/2020 5:15:00 AM
Thank you..am just 16 by the way..still learning..but I appreciate