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But the Mystical Forrest

On the rooftop high^ My eyes like kaleidoscope§ One face in the sky?? Fear but calm I sit.... The spirit of a dragon Storms its eyes at me I don't understand..¿? ..But the mystical forrest???????? And it was no dream...??

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Date: 6/25/2015 9:35:00 PM
a mysterious one! Congrats for your win
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Date: 6/25/2015 8:55:00 AM
This is cool, congrats!
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Date: 6/25/2015 1:27:00 AM
Jorge... Congrats, thank you for the entry. The picture is done right! **SKAT**
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Jorge Tuazon
Date: 6/27/2015 2:59:00 AM
Thank you SKAT wow!! This was my first haiku since like middle school too.

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