But I Must Try

Nothing I can say 
Reaches that dark empty space 
Nothing I can do
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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August 18, 2010 at 4:33 PM
this sounds almost as if you have struggled to the point where you don't care what happens you just want to break through even if you keep trying. this is a very good write, Alan. ~Always&Forever Lynette
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August 3, 2010 at 8:39 PM
Luv this one Alan.. very creative and a substantial message as well.. enjoyed your creativity tonight.. with luv..
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