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But I Don't Know What To Say

I want to make you teary-eyed; I want to rend your heart. I want to show you happy dreams, then tear them all apart. I want to re-instill you with a purpose and a plan. I want to lift you from the depths, and I'll do what I can ... There's only one small problem, though I fear it's here to stay: I want to share myself with you, but I don't know what to say. 13 December 2016

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A Moment Like This

Date: 1/20/2017 7:51:00 PM

You just said it all with your poem ... so keep talking. Don't stop!

J. I. Thomas F.
Date: 1/26/2017 9:15:00 PM

Thanks!

Alexis Y.

Date: 12/13/2016 5:49:00 PM

WoW! James, You've just said it all! This is so romantic and filled with love. Any woman would be happy to get such a proposal. Well done. A without a doubt seven:-) Alexis

J. I. Thomas F.
Date: 12/24/2016 3:22:00 AM

Thanks! You're too kind :)