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Busy Or Not

Certain weeks I’m busy And I run around a lot So I’m either in a tizzy Or I’m wondering why not. For when plans are sometimes lacking You might think I’d just relax But I sent those calm genes packing And I’m antsy to the max. Though, with age in the equation, Staying home at times appeals And I don’t need much persuasion If the cold nips at my heels. Yet it’s balance I am seeking, Busy interspersed with not. Too much either way I’m freaking (Which I tend to do a lot).

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 1/9/2019 1:31:00 PM

Hello Ilene, we allstress one time or another. When we have too much to do.

Funom Makama

Date: 12/18/2018 10:53:00 AM

Lord God! This has excited me to my soul... My spirit dances like a redeemed bastard with your lines... Keep on writing dear friend.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 12/13/2018 1:09:00 PM

Oh, you really had me laughing, Ilene, and so many of us can relate to this busy frenzy. Enjoyed so much! Thanks for giving us smiles today. (still chuckling) Hugs, carolyn

Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 12/13/2018 1:11:00 PM

A fave for me as well...

Arthur Vaso

Date: 12/12/2018 11:53:00 PM

I really enjoyed this poem, I had read another of yours "other poets" and really liked that one too! I mention because today, in a magazine shop, I found an old poetry book, the clerk was so proud of it, they acquired it in a estate sale, and I bought it, and as I started reading some of the poems it made me think of you, the style and way of writing! It made me smile,and is a compliment to your writings! :)

Line Gauthier

Date: 12/12/2018 5:17:00 PM

OMG you're human... aren't we crazy creatures! Fun poem, Ilene. We can certainly relate.

Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 12/13/2018 1:10:00 PM

Yes, human indeed. It's a wonderful portrayal!