Busy Life

What A life we have!
Just spending , not living!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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H. Chouhdry Avatar
December 4, 2014 at 10:25 AM
It could me much awesome if you do more, though loving and it cause me to laugh...yup its true... "To look upon at beauty Glance, We Missed each moment every chance, And to love a maiden lass We shy, This cause Us to Weep and Cry, We burn ,We boil, We burst, and sigh, But Why don't We make effort and try" By Shahid, dedicated you.
Trichet Avatar
July 17, 2014 at 8:14 PM
It doesn't take much, to take time to smell the roses... Great words
Khan Avatar
July 18, 2014 at 2:22 AM
Yep! Thank you for your visit
Thirtyseven Avatar
June 13, 2014 at 5:50 PM
Your words are so few, but they punch hard. Finding the balance is always best, for there are times when so much can be achieved in the flurry of activity.
Khan Avatar
July 17, 2014 at 6:04 AM
Right! Thank you for your visit
Dunn Avatar
June 11, 2014 at 7:57 PM
Short and nay sweet, yes I see people all the time whom just spend momey and never see the beauty of life going on all around them it's simply just say to me and it can at times just makes me sick. So I can relate to what you are saying in this write, Life is for living not for buying stuff. cheri
Khan Avatar
July 17, 2014 at 6:07 AM
by ''spending'' I actually didn't mean 'Spending money''..I meant that life is just going on and on,we're all so much busy that we've almost stopped LIVING it.. :) Thank you for your visit :)
Kendrick Avatar
June 11, 2014 at 5:00 PM
Live each moment for we are on limited time..Enjoy each second for we never know when the end will come..Cherish each breath think about the air that surrounds us..Just start noticing little things and life will be lived..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
Khan Avatar
July 17, 2014 at 6:08 AM
Right! Thank you for your visit :)
Andresen Avatar
June 11, 2014 at 11:37 AM
- Enjoy every day!! - We always get time to smell the flowers ...... (if we want) - Great poem, Saba !! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Khan Avatar
July 17, 2014 at 6:09 AM
Thank you for your visit :)
Anish Avatar
June 11, 2014 at 9:20 AM
Well put. One must remember there is more to life than shopping. Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
Dietrich Avatar
June 10, 2014 at 6:08 PM
Great and succinct way to put it.
Khan Avatar
June 11, 2014 at 3:36 AM
Thankyou for your visit :)
Kendrick Avatar
June 9, 2014 at 10:38 AM
Sometimes that is the way it is..We just spend it and don't really live..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
Khan Avatar
June 11, 2014 at 3:37 AM
My pleasure and thanks :)
Lamoureux Avatar
June 9, 2014 at 9:53 AM
For many their life goes Buy Bye. I enjoyed this thought provoking piece.
Khan Avatar
June 11, 2014 at 3:38 AM
Thank you :)
Callus Avatar
June 9, 2014 at 5:47 AM
There are too many things going on in our lives. It's about time we got our priorities right! // paul
Khan Avatar
June 11, 2014 at 3:38 AM
right...Thank you :)
Lamoureux Avatar
June 9, 2014 at 9:53 AM
Amen to that Paul.
Smith Avatar
June 9, 2014 at 4:01 AM
Forgot the spending.... Get back to nature.... It's practically free
Khan Avatar
June 11, 2014 at 3:40 AM
Thanks for the advice :) Thank you :)
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