Busy Life

What A life we have! Just spending , not living!

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M. Shahid H. Chouhdry

Date: 12/4/2014 10:25:00 AM

It could me much awesome if you do more, though loving and it cause me to laugh...yup its true... "To look upon at beauty Glance, We Missed each moment every chance, And to love a maiden lass We shy, This cause Us to Weep and Cry, We burn ,We boil, We burst, and sigh, But Why don't We make effort and try" By Shahid, dedicated you.

Mark Trichet

Date: 7/17/2014 8:14:00 PM

It doesn't take much, to take time to smell the roses... Great words

Saba Khan
Date: 7/18/2014 2:22:00 AM

Yep! Thank you for your visit

Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 6/13/2014 5:50:00 PM

Your words are so few, but they punch hard. Finding the balance is always best, for there are times when so much can be achieved in the flurry of activity.

Saba Khan
Date: 7/17/2014 6:04:00 AM

Right! Thank you for your visit

Cherl Dunn

Date: 6/11/2014 7:57:00 PM

Short and nay sweet, yes I see people all the time whom just spend momey and never see the beauty of life going on all around them it's simply just say to me and it can at times just makes me sick. So I can relate to what you are saying in this write, Life is for living not for buying stuff. cheri

Saba Khan
Date: 7/17/2014 6:07:00 AM

by ''spending'' I actually didn't mean 'Spending money''..I meant that life is just going on and on,we're all so much busy that we've almost stopped LIVING it.. :) Thank you for your visit :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/11/2014 5:00:00 PM

Live each moment for we are on limited time..Enjoy each second for we never know when the end will come..Cherish each breath think about the air that surrounds us..Just start noticing little things and life will be lived..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Saba Khan
Date: 7/17/2014 6:08:00 AM

Right! Thank you for your visit :)