Busted

It tests the air as
delicately as snail eyes.
Dog!  Put out that joint!

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Kelly Zakerski

September 24, 2009 at 3:05 AM

I love it!

Carol Sunshine Brown

July 16, 2009 at 3:17 PM

Oh my goodness Sue. I am walking in my list of favs today. Of course your there don't ask. I picked this poem to read and almost peed my drawers. Made my day thank you. Love, Carol

Sajdah Al-Riyami

June 12, 2009 at 9:21 AM

Dog!put out that Joint**HAHA**Lauffs!

May 29, 2009 at 4:45 PM

Got a chuckle out of this one with your creative and direct approach. Nice one! Have a good weekend. Karen

Nadia Shahwan

May 28, 2009 at 7:56 AM

Very beautiful. Thank u for commenting my poem...re. LongLive- may I say read between the lines? I'm not against the other peaceful religion in this pretty world; history recorded many pains. Wishing you all the best.

John Loving Iii

May 27, 2009 at 4:35 PM

what you know about dat! jhl

Daver Austin

May 27, 2009 at 3:19 PM

Oooooowwww, Mary Jane! No thanks. My mind is warped enough, thank you. Good write, Sue, as usual. Love, daver

Yoni Dvorkis

May 27, 2009 at 11:44 AM

I feel kind of lost with this one. Is this a literal dog smoking a J? If it's metaphor how does it test the air? Sorry don't mean to be nitpicky I just want to get the joke really...