Bus Ride

while riding a bus

my wallet fell on the seat ---

a man called me thief
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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February 15, 2016 at 12:03 PM
Troy, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
A. Sharma Avatar
July 28, 2015 at 12:40 AM
Awesome pen Troy n a superb win ! Big congrats!
A  Avatar
July 24, 2015 at 4:52 PM
TROY, congratulations, awesome senryu. SKAT LOVE
Roper Avatar
July 24, 2015 at 11:41 AM
Congratulations on your win a seven. Hugs Eve
Allison Avatar
July 24, 2015 at 8:34 AM
great one Troy - congrats:-) hugs Jan xx
Onclaud Avatar
July 12, 2015 at 12:22 PM
how easily people perceive things in a different way... a good one, troy!.. huggs
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