Bus Experience

Piles of human arms and sloppy heads laid
On food-trays of half-eaten buns with cold tea
Magazines, milk bottles, and jackets
Passed us by in a whisk of infinity;
You never once moved but peacefully slept
Just this night----
Amidst the chill of a bus-filled moment.

In deep amens, I hold your face for a while
But time beckons military hours, grating;
I write you a letter of love that never questions
As courage greets me again on enemy zones.
I stay a bit longer even while duty calls
Shall I leave you once more 
After a lit embrace seemingly endless?
My only gesture is to let you know of my fidelity
And you rest while I slowly walk out the bus door.
Tell me, who is the better person?


Henry W.
Contest...Brief, Unforgettable Moment
Date Nov 25, 2013
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Ligon Avatar
December 1, 2013 at 9:19 PM
I love your descript images and the emotions you captured. Congrats, Henry!
Gasun Avatar
December 1, 2013 at 6:20 AM
An excellent write this is my dear friend. I love this poem & the story you've shared. Thank you so much for sharing! My big hearty congratulations on your great win! love lots and big hugs, Leonora
Minardi Avatar
November 29, 2013 at 11:23 PM
this one makes me sad, leaves me to ponder how she feels after. a very great and sad brief moment, Henry. congrats on the big win.
Adams Avatar
November 29, 2013 at 10:16 PM
good poem...congrats on your win :)
Jones Avatar
November 29, 2013 at 10:14 PM
Its hard for both...many congratulations... enjoyed this very much...
Guzzi Avatar
November 29, 2013 at 7:16 PM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Fisher Avatar
November 29, 2013 at 6:23 PM
Way to go on the contest.
Andresen Avatar
November 29, 2013 at 12:04 PM
- Congratulations on your winning poem in: - BRIEF, UNFORGETTABLE MOMENT / / Nette Onclaud contest. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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November 26, 2013 at 1:17 AM
thank you, henry... pleased to have you.. huggs
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