Burnt Out

current girlfriend problems
the dead one is far better 
than the live one
if it were'nt for lying lips
i think i could do better
but one of those lies 
just happen to be
i love you
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Kendrick Avatar
September 4, 2012 at 4:39 PM
Sad when one gives that lie..Interesting work penned..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
Breidenthal Avatar
April 7, 2012 at 8:52 PM
aw... so is life I suppose. I like this poem. Always, Laura
Babcock Avatar
April 5, 2012 at 12:34 PM
Make the best out of everyday and yes life can sometimes be crazy. love phyl
Wesley Avatar
March 27, 2012 at 9:32 AM
Don't ever burn out John; you take what is happening and make magic out of it. Love your poetry and this rates high! 7 for sure
Taormina Avatar
March 18, 2012 at 6:49 PM
omg that was so real I kaughed out loud, not that it was funny but more so because it sounded like an echo comming from the walls herein my own house.
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March 16, 2012 at 10:00 AM
wow...kind of mean..but, honest..pd
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