Jordan Dickinson Poet Rhyme

Burnt

In your voice I felt the presence of ice
When you said we are together no longer
You had my love, my everlasting vice
Turning it away when you tried to be stronger
 
I had been fooled to believe it would work
You couldn't look past a single obstacle
You assumed by my smile I had to be a jerk
This timing for sorrow is nothing but impeccable 
 
How could you forsake the things you said?
How could you do this to me for nothing?
How come my affections you only led?
I can not believe you ever loved me. 
 
Promises you made and on foolishness I trusted.
If you can't keep them you shouldn't have spoken
The second burn is when my affections are busted
Tear away this heart of a spoiled sad token
 
I can not believe you ever loved me
I can not believe you ever loved me
You never loved me
Never loved me

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Bethany St John February 25, 2013 at 8:32 PM mm...the heartbreak of having what we loved and then realizing it was a lie. Its a painful place to be. Great write Jordan!

Charles Henderson January 10, 2013 at 1:58 AM I enjoyed stopping by tonight. Jordan Dickinson January 10, 2013 at 3:27 PM Thank you for stopping by Charles, it is much appreciated!

Debra Squyres January 9, 2013 at 9:05 PM So many are quick to say the words we want to hear...and often has no depth. Jordan Dickinson January 10, 2013 at 3:28 PM I wish it wasn't as such. I am a very quiet person, if I say something it would have been thought over thoroughly before expressed. Thank you for reading, I hope you liked it !

Jancarl Campi January 9, 2013 at 7:38 PM What a poem. Been there and done that. Take care, Jancarl Jordan Dickinson January 10, 2013 at 3:29 PM Take care as well Jancarl, Thank you for reading my words I wish you the best!

Lori Lucas Mcclure January 9, 2013 at 6:10 PM Enjoyed reading your work! Awesome write! Jordan Dickinson January 10, 2013 at 3:29 PM Thank you for reading it! It is much appreciated!!

Debbie Guzzi January 9, 2013 at 6:09 PM Sometimes..many times...those words were only meant for the moment they were said and not forever..Light & Love Jordan Dickinson January 10, 2013 at 3:30 PM I thank you for reading this poem of mine and giving me some personal insight. I will continue looking forward to the person whose words are forever. Take care Debbie!!