Burning Question

I have written of love and romance someone
passed a comment about being careful of
false idols. This left burning questions within
the mind and heart. Golden crucifixes, ornate
statues, papal rings to be kissed are not these
false idols, paintings adorn the walls, robes of
elegance are worn for what purpose. Even the
so called father of the church held in the respect
of being no mortal man, to which he surely is.
Why are woman forbidden to preach the word 
of the lord when in the past so many have and 
been sainted for it, it is not man's given right
to put himself above all others. This church
keeper of the ten commandments, throughout
histories pages has broken everyone of them,
persecution, torture, war, all heralded under
Gods name by the church. Secrecy within the
regime, the closed ranks of some papal inner
cell, what lurks, celibacy such an unnatural
form of life and living, how can a celibate
man preach to me on the everyday ups and 
downs of married life when he has no real
experience. Where is the compassion and 
humility in this church, the Lord gave words
to alleviate suffering, the churches laws on
contraception compound the misery of the 
third world masses, with AIDS and over 
population. It seems to me that through the
ages the church has lost it way, remember Jesus
died on a wooden cross for all mankind, all.
Please do not think of me has an unbeliever
for you would be so wrong, I live and love
the path of the Carpenters son, I still love his
word and his word was love.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 3/30/2010 4:26:00 AM
I have never believed in the concept of religion...how can anyone, when such atrocities are contrived in its name ...I am with you here Daniel...Love is all you need and if that's all there was in the world...how amazing it would.... be no hate.. no greed..Living in love and optimism....Allie
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Date: 3/25/2010 1:00:00 PM
Emphatically powerful words Daniel and expressions of truth .. I was raised Catholic all my life and some of the rules are to be questioned indeed.. especially the celibacy issue... right on target with this new fav of mine Daniel... appreciate your telling it like it is... and who left a nasty comment on your beautiful poetry??? how sad when it comes to intense criticism instead of total enjoyment by some readers..luv.. and more luv.. for this great write.. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 3/25/2010 9:19:00 AM
So much truth in this one...You have expressed yourself well..I especially like your last four lines that tell me much about yourself...The Carpenter of Nazareth is the only way to get there...Following in his footsteps is not easy...Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 3/25/2010 8:13:00 AM
I am a non believer Daniel - But - I agree with everything that you have just said - And do you know what? - Nothing will change - Ever - Just keep your faith in your heart and you will know that you are a good person - Thats my penny's worth lol - Thanks for an outstanding share - I relished every single word written -:)
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Date: 3/25/2010 7:47:00 AM
very nice write loved it faleshia
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